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The letter-like stanza form brings the feel of confiding in a lover. The way this poem is arranged, as if a delicious and well-organize...

by `ATrue

A beautiful poem in a somewhat rare form that is not used everyday. The story this poem portrays is of sweetness and innocence, the kin...

by =AlecBell

There’s a constant feel of twisting and twirling to this poem, the words bind the reader, slowly wrapping and tightening over th...


The opening line creates a very mellow mood and sets the tune of the entire poem, giving the reader the comfort and ease of wallowing i...

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*Moonbeams

I've been following *Moonbeams for quite some time now, and every time I read her works I’m blown away. It’s not only about the touch, the direction and the beautiful composition of each and every little word and nuance, it’s about the heart and feel that her works radiate. I really recommend with all my heart. :nod:

Inspiration Breathe

A short paragraph/stanza that really touched or affected me; something worth your time. If it’s something that a dA member wrote – please, go and comment on the piece.

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I click once, framing the front of her chest. I zoom in on the right breast, refocus, shoot. Then I zoom in on the scarred skin, refocus, and shoot.

“You’re doing great. Just a few more.”

I see a concentrated spot of black and blue. Zoom, refocus, click. She begins to move, and I try to refocus again, failing to compensate. I peer over my camera and see that she’s crying. My palm leans into the side of my Cyber-Shot, primed for shooting, but I know this is it.

“It’s okay. We can stop.”

She sniffs, arms shaking at her side. The gown is still sitting in her lap.

“Don’t worry about it. We’re done for the day.” I close the camera shutter and unlatch the tripod.

“Are you disgusted by me?” Eva’s voice is mature, revealing only a slight tremble.

“No. Of course not.”

“You are.”

“I am not disgusted by you.”

I want to tell her I’ve seen worse, but stick with standard procedure: reassure, promote positive outcomes, and under no circumstance imply any kind of diagnosis.



- Excerpt taken of 'When the World Ends'
by Nicole Miyashiro

Published in A Cappella Zoo issue #2

Do you write better when you are depressed?

34%
22 deviants said Sometimes, depend on how much depressed I am.
25%
16 deviants said Yup. Strange enough.
17%
11 deviants said [comment please]
12%
8 deviants said I write better when you strip.
8%
5 deviants said No, I write just the same.
5%
3 deviants said No. But sometimes I see things under my bed!

36 hours.

Journal Entry: Sat Jul 4, 2009, 6:43 AM
36 hours.


I've been somewhat inactive lately, as you can see. But do not worry, it is not for lack of ambition or motivation or anything else. It is purely for lack of time. For example: for the last 36 hours I've been awake working on my band's recordings, and the 3 days previous of that I've been sleeping about 5 hours per night, the rest of the time deeply invested in the recordings. Things are moving rather slow, but steady. The results are amazingly surprising, for the good side, but the way to there is filled (or more precisely uberpacked) with endless errors and problems, costing about 3 times over the original planning. Call it inexperience, call it bad luck – I call it pressure. We entered the recording room a month before originally planned, with lots of pressure and a very tight time table – those things always lead to endless problems. Because of that we didn't plan things as we should have and ended up in a very tiring and stressing situation. But today, for the first time since the recordings started, I feel optimistic, because finally things start to sound the way they should.

So I haven't been very active, but it's a good thing too because after the poem-per-day month I felt like I worked too much on my writing, in the sense of pressuring myself to write, and felt like I needed a little breathing space. Give you guys a little breathing space too. So in what little time I had in the in-between I worked on my novel and other writings, keeping a low profile and investing my time in the recordings. I'm still not in the free-time zone, but things are going to change soon. Let me explain:

In about a month I'm flying to Europe for at least 3 months. But the original planning is a year. I'm going to try and promote my band and maybe get signed, hopefully. Professionally it's like going after your dream in the hope of seeing anything out of it, personally it's a huge change, something I needed, something new and exciting. I'm looking to make a very interesting thing out of it – maybe learn something in some foreign university (I thought about literature or so, but so far haven't found anything that I can pay the expenses and is in English – I don't have a lot of money and I can't formally work, because it would be illegal). I'm taking this step to try and focus on my art too, having the opportunity to focus on writing, being inspired by different places and maybe even meet with agents or editors or I don't know, maybe good things will come out of this too.

As you see, I'm not really organized about it, because I don't even know where I'm going yet. I'm starting in Poland, going for my friend's wedding, and we'll see from there. The important thing is that I have to find the place to settle as fast as possible. So right now I'm looking for universities/courses in literature, and/or a legal good job. That's about the only thing I have time to look for, and when I'll find that thing I'll start looking up for the rest. Another interesting things this opportunity brings up is the chance to meet you guys :) I'll be travling a lot, moving from country to country in the first couple of months, or at least in some period in this adventure. So maybe I'll get the chance to meet some of you guys, that could be very interesting :dance:

So if you know of good university that offer interesting things to foreigner (with a modest fee), or how to find work in some country across Europe, or anything else regarding the music-biz, or just plainly want to shout random things – let me know. Either way, right now, I'm VERY tired lol :D

Sending my love to you guys, and uploading a new poem I've been working on for the last couple of months,

- Omri.





Reading is Life

The Nuremberg Interviews: Conversations with the Defendants and Witnesses
by Leon Goldensohn

I admit to sin in reading history about WWI and WWII. I'm intrigued by those two periods, especially by the latter. This book collects psychiatric interviews with the defendants and witnesses that stood in those trials on 1946, and is aimed at getting to the bottom line of their personalities. Very interesting, very different, fascinating to see the lies people would tell to save their lives, the way they act, everything - simply fascinating.






  • Mood: Content
  • Listening to: Our recordings - over and over again!!!
  • Reading: John Gardner - The Art of Fiction
  • Watching: Angel S:4, Lost S:5, Love Actually
  • Playing: Kurzweil PC3x
  • Eating: Pizza
  • Drinking: Who needs love when there's Southern Comfort

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Name: Omri Luzon
Age: 27
Location: Israel
Artistic Medium: Literature [Poetry/Short prose]
Chatrooms: #LitLove, #LITplease

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Groups I take part in:
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Groups I used to take part in:
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Other important activities:
:bulletgreen: Agony Corner - Vol. 1, Vol. 2, Vol. 3
:bulletgreen: #LitLove’s manager
:bulletgreen: Small Hours Collection - Vol. 1, Vol. 2
:bulletgreen: Resources on the Side!
:bulletgreen: Behind the Words - Vol. 1: ATrue, Vol. 2: Snow-Machine,

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My Features:
=Writers-Slam - Click Here
*DailyDeviants - Click Here
=Lit-Resources - Click Here
Small Hours Collection - Click Here

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The Special Corner!!!!

This is a little story about friendship...

:icongaioumonbatou::iconflutterings::iconagmeade::iconevile33::iconladylincoln:

One day `GaioumonBatou said he wanted to be a billioner, so he dressed as a stripper and dragged me all the way to strip-street. He knocked down `Flutterings' door (for she is known as THE madame down strip-street) and she said that if =AGMeade will turn me into the crimefighter named The Voice then ^LadyLincoln will turn me into a newt, and =evile33 will cinder me to ashes - and then she'd let him strip for money. So now I'm a little pile of dust.

The Moral - with friends like this no wonder I came out so fucked up. :crazy:

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Jul 5, 2009
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Jul 5, 2009
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Jul 4, 2009
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*tdibz94
Jul 4, 2009
4:42 pm

Comments


HEY!

THANKS FOR MAKING ME FEEL WELCOME, THE FAVES & THE WATCH <3
:huggggggggggggggg: this is me taking advantage of every second i get to spend here

:cuddle: (see, that's so worth another two seconds) :giggle:

i never "left" you know, ive just been "lurking sporadically" because i literally have been so busy with so many things that i couldnt even afford to log in for a while (and i know you know how a minute turns into an hour here, you know? i know.)

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Omri dear, thank you for :+fav:ing my story Crazy-Beautiful, I am very touched that you found something lovely in its brevity!

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