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A Souvenir of Tasteness

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Everything which is life, is made of a thin layer
of an approximation to confusion.
Both our fingers, interlocked

Make a souvenir of tasteness,
to relish and delight in an embarrassment
limited to only you and me.

On this bench, we browse through slow photos,
sea-salt drenched-photos, moving sideways
from your cuddle to my inability;

words, tongues, all tied up in that which is
of greater possibility to please. As summer marches
down off the shore,

traveling the thick old stones of Neve-Zedek.
This is Tel-Aviv, in the first light of morning,
encompassed in everything which is Life.

Crude and coarse, as a dozing bulldozer,
I roll past antiquities of renewed sentimental value;
So clumsy of me,

my ears are as fearful as a little child is of words,
long complex sentences of few words,
dreadfully limping atop wine-stained lips.

Damn all these foolishness!
The train moves fastest as it slides out of a turn.
Still, you turn to astonish me.

Bare and defenseless I wash in your light
as the frights pass
and the glitters of past water my forehead,

to ease the temperature. The guilt of knowing who I am.
There now, it slowly comes
as a smooth breeze carried on the wings of passing seagulls.

Then do I realize, only too late,
how I wish those fingers will never let me go.
Stasis. What a strange word that is. Even the flow is frozen in this one, caught in a phonetic maze of intemporality. Stasis, like a memory, to vivid to get caught in the loophole of routine, rubbed on your eyes, your face, teasingly, funny thing that stasis is. It tastes rich and exquisite. Stasis.

This poem was written very fast, almost intuitively. Those of you who follow my works know that usually I spend weeks, if not months, in polishing a poem. Rarely do I feel that something is so right the imperfect way it is, this is one of those times.
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GoldenSunset's avatar
Right now, this has to be your #4 on the Top 10. And I'm willing to bet that when I read this again in a week, it'll move up :cookie: