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Sitting here in this pointless office, I wander in my mind to different places, different times, different worlds. Somehow it feels like the world is trying to erase my ambition, creativity and ability to touch other people. I don’t know what to do with myself anymore, it is frustrating to not think that you are a machine, typing and pressing gray buttons to the rhythm of the ticking clock.

Some low whispered empty conversations, annoying mechanical phone rings, the night is falling down so fast you can’t even see it coming. The windows are so dark you cannot feel the real difference between day and night, it’s all the same here, all the same.

A girl approaches me, bends a little on my desk, smiling. She says she’s from Human Resources, wants to interview me about the workers conditions. I nod as I log off my user and detach off the keyboard. She leads me into a small room, round table, two chairs and a little laptop sitting quietly, humming to itself.

She asks me about my work, my tasks, responsibilities and vision. I reply, noticing her hand slowly crawling towards mine. The paycheck, the bonuses, her fingers on my skin, the breaks, the inter relationships, her lips against my neck, the attitude of the management, the annual reports, her tongue in my ear, the neon lighting, the softness of hands.

She takes her shirt off, takes my pants off; I close my eyes and listen to the clock's tick, just as if I’m typing on my keyboard. There’s no going back now. From here on it’s a one way street, a path I never wanted to explore. She is on me now, kissing  passionately, praying in my ear, saying my name, moaning.

I sit in my car, hands on wheel. Engine turned on. Murmuring. Complaining on the weather. I shouldn’t go home… I really shouldn’t go home. Driving down through rain and smoke, a cigarette tucked between my fingers, eyes grow tired. It’s not the time, I tell myself as her lips kiss mine, it’s not the time for dreaming. The traffic light turns green, pumping the gas, the cars are moving. Eyelids grow heavy, fingers on my chest, left palm against the back of my neck. The traffic light turns green, I pump the gas, the cars are moving. It’s time to go. My eyes are asleep, the car is off the road, and I wonder what day it is.
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Not a normal winter day, not a gray painted routine. This is just a little photograph out of life, a few moments in the mind of someone who is not able, not willing, to change.

Published in The Missing Slate - [link]
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Given 2009-03-12
I admit I read this lovely offering more than once. There was something that kept pulling me in and pulling me in deep. the Drive by `leoraigarath, seems on the surface like a simple fantasy, but there is much more here. There are several ways to interpret this piece, but nonetheless, take what you will from it and let those thoughts linger with you. ( Featured by `LadyLincoln )

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:icontentaspyman:
nothing more to say that beautiful! So lifelike!~
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`leoraigarath Oct 19, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you :nod:
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:iconcrimsonthrenody:
An enjoyable read. Dark in its own way. Congrats on the publication and DD (late).
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`leoraigarath Dec 14, 2010  Professional Writer
Thank you :hug:
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:iconspirrus:
I don't know what to say about this but...wow...
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`leoraigarath Apr 5, 2009  Professional Writer
:blushes: thank you, I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
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:iconviviancolfax:
It's difficult for me to comment on something I find simply amazing. I can never find the right words.
So instead I will thank you for the time you took to submit this, and for the time it gave me to read it. :D
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`leoraigarath Mar 26, 2009  Professional Writer
:thanks: :blushes: I know what you mean, I can never find the right words too. Thank you.
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:iconbrynlutek:
I love this scene, the way the slightly abstract fractured images fall together into a congruous whole is stunning. The piece in it's entirety is just captivating, like reality drenched in an ethereal haze of passive perception.
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